hey
never herd the original, but you did a pretty good job.
hey
never herd the original, but you did a pretty good job.
The original can be found in the 2005 section of my audio works. Thanks for the review.
quality destroys it
if it was higher quality, it would be a lot better, sorry
it's only bad in the first part. did you listen past the first part?
it sounded pertty good
I'm not sure if this is a remix of a popular song, but anyway, it was pretty good, something that i think you might have wanted to do was make the noise that follows the fast synth more powerful, ugh, i know thats not clear, but i have no idea how to describe it , but it would give your song the edge.
You're right I don't know what you are talking about and I feel bad for not knowing :(
Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it :D
little boring
lots of bass for sure, it might have been kool if you had the bass come into the song later, instead of having it play through the whole song
hm, when i turn this into a song, that's probably what's going to happen.
but it's just a boring loop for now lol.
also, i took out the melody, because i'm trying to find a good vocal track to go into it, but who knows if that'll happen.
relay good
im not sure if you could fix this, but it was very echo-y. only complaint.
i think you're right..but the thing is that my pc is like ancient...and the dry recording was really sounding..dry and recordish...u know...so i though of giving it some reverb...and viola..but i guess i should bring down the wetness.......!....thnx neway..man really happy to see a genuine..critic.....cheers!
learn basic music theory
the melodies were terrible, if you go to YouTube, and look up some basic music theory, you could do a lot better
Very helpful. Id like to see your review also in my next submission!
not a dance song
no way is this a dance song, this should be put under industrial or something. anyway, it wasn't too bad, pretty harsh sounding though.
thanks dude. i didnt even realise that i made an industrial song. thats why its always hard for me to pick the genres for my music. i just make what ever i feel.
nice to her lyrics
the beginning was good for the most part, but the beat from the begging to 53 seconds didn't sound too good to me, also the ending was pretty sudden. but overall, it wasn't that bad.
i know man!..i also felt that the ending was sudden....but nevertheless...thnx dude...appreciate a good critic....will keep that in mind the nxt time...:D cheers!
love the bass
the bass was good for the most part, the thing that bothered me the most was that you waited till about 2minutes in to actually have a different instrument (witch sounded mediocre at best) drums and stuff were not bad also.
bass 7.5/10
other melodies 3.5/10
drums 5.5/10
Couldn't be more correct, I guess. Thanks for the review
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